Have a listen, i want some feedback on my music !! i wanna send it to record companys so please have a listen?

i think you go for the stress in your voice too early in my opinion this both sounds wierd and takes away from when the stress is necessary. seriously mate i think you should have a listen to this guy and you will learn alot a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c21SfaAwBw0" rel="nofollow"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c21SfaAwB…/a